the Ultimate

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the Ultimate

Postby Hennie » 15 Jul 2012, 13:53

I sleep my dream
I am falling fast
into the hands of the Ultimate

I speak my myth
I am searching
for the answer of the Ultimate

I drink my softening
I am changing
to a tool of the Ultimate

I think my idea
I am a spark
of conscious of the Ultimate

I guess
I should leave
it all to the Ultimate
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Re: the Ultimate

Postby Aphritha » 15 Jul 2012, 16:44

I really like this! A good reminder...
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Re: the Ultimate

Postby skydove » 18 Jul 2012, 13:09

Your poems are like markers in the mist Hennie, thank you.
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Re: the Ultimate

Postby Hennie » 18 Jul 2012, 16:12

Thank you, it feels good to know my work can be of help.
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