Poem dreamed on 20 April 2008

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Poem dreamed on 20 April 2008

Postby Fox » 20 Mar 2013, 23:57

I was going through my Ovate Journal and came across this from a dream diary entry:

Your eyes are like night-blooming flowers
That blossom in the light of the moon
Only to fade at break of day

My love is like a beautiful moth
Who seeks out your scent in the night breeze
And drinks your sweet nectar in the moonlight
But who only lives until the dawn
yr pal, Fox

"So good luck came, and on my roof did light, like noiseless snow."
– Robert Herrick, from 'The Coming of Good Luck'
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Re: Poem dreamed on 20 April 2008

Postby Mystical Journey » 21 Mar 2013, 03:16

love it!!!
Brightest blessings,
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Re: Poem dreamed on 20 April 2008

Postby Moonleaf » 23 Mar 2013, 12:27

This is wonderful - great use of imagery, well done.
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