Poem for Lucas

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Poem for Lucas

Postby emmao1111 » 19 Jun 2010, 21:38

A short poem written for my Son. I'm sure you won't need to guess at what inspired this piece! Feel free to leave any comments. :D

Poem for Lucas

Soft head snuffling.
Mouth moving rhythmically.
Intimately cocooned together,
you teach me your ancient skill.
Trust implicit,
each a part of the other.
Simple, pure, fleeting,
our eyes locked,
souls singing.
What will you be?
My precious, precious child.
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Re: Poem for Lucas

Postby White Star » 19 Jun 2010, 23:40

Beautiful... :cloud9: Our own precious children turned into a six and a half foot skin head who loves his mum and a five and a half foot Goth rock chick who is still dads little girl... :hug: they both work hard and play hard too.

Blessings
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Re: Poem for Lucas

Postby emmao1111 » 20 Jun 2010, 10:11

Hahahaha! I have a Daughter as well as a Son. I hope I am as fortunate to have them grow into such loving children as yours. Thank you for taking the time to bring a smile to my morning :wink:
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