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Snake

Postby Bruadar » 03 Aug 2010, 11:07

Just before going on my first obod camp working with the druid animal oracle cards I drew Nathair the adder which inspired much in me including the following - what a joy to share with the tribe. :D


Snake

This is snake time
This is magic time
Time of transformation
Shedding the outer old skins
The tired, the worn out skins

Revealing an inner new self,
Working with, moving on, sliding through,
Beneath, around, underground without a sound.

Tasting the air with flicking tongue.
Here the perfume of flowers
Here the stench of death

Forked tongue speaking
Hear my silence, understand
Understand the fork of my words;
The below the beneath,
The truth of transforming
The key to change

The skin splits when roughed
On the harshness of rock
Self-inflicting just enough
The shedding can begin
Leaving the outer, the old behind.

Bit by bit revealing the new, the shining –
The cycle starts again.
Its life, its death
Its fear, its trust
Its harming and healing
Its holding on its letting go
Its transformation, realisation
Rhythm and dance
Sleep and wake – SNAKE!
Keep me away from the wisdom which does not cry, the philosophy which does not laugh and the greatness which does not bow before children. Kahlil Gibran
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Re: Snake

Postby Nikki 2 » 03 Aug 2010, 15:23

Wow! There's a lot in there!
As I was reading your poem my 13year old son came running upstairs to show me Casper's newly shed skin! Casper is his Corn snake. How's that for coincidence. :)
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Re: Snake

Postby Bruadar » 03 Aug 2010, 18:08

Thanks Nikki and thats amazing
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love your quote
Keep me away from the wisdom which does not cry, the philosophy which does not laugh and the greatness which does not bow before children. Kahlil Gibran
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Re: Snake

Postby wyeuro » 05 Aug 2010, 03:08

great poem, beautiful magic. i believe coincidences like that are not just coincidental!
visit my druid blog: http://wyldwyverne.wordpress.com/

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