where does the sky begin?
not upwards but down?
one million billionth of an inch
from the earth
in between each step
we are walking
in the sky
where does the sky begin?
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where does the sky begin?
by Ade Sundog » 28 Aug 2010, 14:43
'Tis far to Avalon , but though we go our different ways, i'll see you there anon'
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by emmao1111 » 28 Aug 2010, 16:14
Love this 
I would be tempted to scrap the first line, letting the title do the same job, but this is personal choice. I love the idea, and the neatness of it.
I would be tempted to scrap the first line, letting the title do the same job, but this is personal choice. I love the idea, and the neatness of it.
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by wyeuro » 29 Aug 2010, 02:45
simple and lovely.
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by Michael C. Page » 29 Aug 2010, 23:29
Love it. Good show Old boy. 
"If a man does not keep pace with his companions,
perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer.
Let him step to the music he hears,
however measured or far away." - Thoreau
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by Melasha » 29 Aug 2010, 23:57
Skywalking....I like it! Very nice
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by Ade Sundog » 31 Aug 2010, 13:50
Thanx for likin it
'Tis far to Avalon , but though we go our different ways, i'll see you there anon'
Roy Harper
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by treegod » 31 Aug 2010, 16:46
"A good man breathes through his heals." Itsuo Tsuda
Love the idea
Love the idea
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Re: where does the sky begin?
by Ade Sundog » 01 Sep 2010, 15:34
Thanx Treegod
ps , groovy quote
ps , groovy quote
'Tis far to Avalon , but though we go our different ways, i'll see you there anon'
Roy Harper
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