Thanks for the kind coments
Lily I'd wouldn't of written the autum version if you hadn't of posted.
Both our poems have a diffrent feel to them. Its good to see diffrent styles and express emotions though poetry. I love autum and fungi and fruit ect ,
i'd much like to have a better rhyme for beaks though. I do wish we could center justifie text on here as it looks odd all left justified.
I much prefer the summer version to the autum one as the first came to me (whilst out riding my motorcycle) where as the second i had to think about more. Strange how inspiration strikes,