so much left

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so much left

Postby meicalabawen » 27 Sep 2010, 03:10

there's only so much left of me
my son
only so much left to take
you're so needy
my son
...but there's only so much left
to take

and take
and take
and take

there's only so much left
there's only
so much left
to take

so much
so much to take
my son
so much

none left
my son
none

it's time i left
my son

i left
my son

i

left

i

left
left
left

it's not right
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Re: so much left

Postby Teileag » 27 Sep 2010, 07:09

Thank you for this poem, Meicalabawen!
The sounds of the winds in the elms
like the strings of a harp being played,
the note of the blackbird that claps
with the wings of delight in the glade.

Attributed to Columba


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Re: so much left

Postby BlackMoon » 27 Sep 2010, 08:46

Tnx is a beautiful :)
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