What we’ve woven

[Daryvas]

I have shared 2 poems before this one and will share even more unless I am requested to no longer do so. Feedback is appreciated even if it is of a critical nature. I welcome your thoughts and inspirations! The poems I am sharing are a direct result of me opening myself to Awen over a year ago. Let the Inspiration, Creativity and Love flow to us, through us and around us.


What we’ve woven

What was the color and cloth of love then,
faded-grayed, graded-frayed?
So many threaded broken looms
in empty practiced rooms;
half done weaves in familiar patterns
with crooked warps and wefts left hanging.
But we, dreaming reality, have into this cloth
woven Love’s brightest and best threads.

[Tynan Elder Oak]

I really love this... I often think of the weaving we do in the non physical reality in which we spend so much of our time. Thank you for posting this. Samhain blessings to you.

[meicalabawen]

Very nice.

[wyeuro]

lovely - well woven poem

[Fox of the Oaks]

I love the use of various levels of meaning combined with ambiguity (supported by the poem, a positive thing), and the word-play, and the meta-image of the subject of the poem appearing within in the structure of the poem itself.

That's the best way I can explain it.

[Huathe]

Wonderful!

[Heddwen]

Very clever.

We are the weavers, we are the web. (from the chant)

[Daryvas]

I am very pleased that you find worth in this poem. Thank you for your comments.