A Song to the Goddess, Number 1

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A Song to the Goddess, Number 1

Postby Daryvas » 11 Nov 2010, 19:39

White silver guardian of deepest night,
Illumined goddess clothed in light,
Thy beauty bright doth radiant shine,
Upon the waters of my mind.

Dark surrounds thee ever still,
Like folds of finest midnight silk.
While diamond stars adorn thy dress
I stare transfixed at thine egress

Thy silver flame within me burns,
And for thy presence ever yearns.
Oh, lovely goddess of the night,
Keep me forever in thy sight.
We are not human beings having a spiritual experience. We are spiritual beings having a human experience. - Teilhard de Chardin

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Re: A Song to the Goddess, Number 1

Postby siouxnkiowa4ever » 10 Jan 2011, 08:26

That is really really beautiful! :kitty:
Hugs to all from Lizzy, a Free Spirited Creature :fly:


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Re: A Song to the Goddess, Number 1

Postby Daryvas » 13 Jan 2011, 18:04

Thank you, siouxnkiowa.
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