Salmon of water, Salmon of fire

[PHILIPPE]

Twisting & turning
Working their way upstream -
Salmon are fighting the river

See the sparkles
See the rainbows -
Salmon are fighting the river

A great torrent of light
Irradiates the fight -
Salmon are dancing
The dance of the river

Watch the magicians in
Their multi-colour robes -
Salmon are adding
Fire to the water

A wild heartbeat pulsates
Energizing the stream -
Salmon are chasing
The whiff of ecstasy

Summoning the forces
In the valley we hear
Salmon celebrating
The bliss of home coming!

[Huathe]

I love this. It is so easy to visualize.

[D'Arzhur]

Watch the magicians in
Their multi-colour robes -
Salmon are adding
Fire to the water

Very nice ! Thank you
Would it be ok for me to copy this for my journal ?

[PHILIPPE]

Blessings to you, D'Arzhur and Hawthorne_Ent. Thank you for your posts, I am glad you liked it.

D'Arzhur, no problem of course to use the poem for your journal - thank you !


Philippe

[D'Arzhur]

Philippe & looking forward to your next poem
PS : last weekend I was in Irland for the first time and had a great encounter with the River Boyne - evocating naturally the salmon -