And yet they still walk the earth

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And yet they still walk the earth

Postby PHILIPPE » 24 Nov 2010, 16:37

An offering to all living creatures -



And yet
They still walk the earth

Year after year
Shedding their skin

Cosmic messengers
Of the past

Moving in-between
Dreams

Wrapping the earth in
Soft
Yellow
Translucent energy

With a gentle bow
Acknowledging
The power
Within

Their stories unfolding
In circles

A great big leap
On a divine speck of dust

Closed eyes
Joyful hearts
Entranced by the sky

An offering
To the Goddess
On a pulsating
Stage

A gut-wrenching love
Brought to the altar
By bleeding souls
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Re: And yet they still walk the earth

Postby Heddwen » 24 Nov 2010, 18:23

Wow :applause:
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Re: And yet they still walk the earth

Postby wyeuro » 27 Nov 2010, 03:51

by cromm that's a good poem. beautiful magic - like oz dreamtime. :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
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Re: And yet they still walk the earth

Postby D'Arzhur » 27 Nov 2010, 09:19

:applause: :applause: :applause:
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Re: And yet they still walk the earth

Postby Huathe » 27 Nov 2010, 16:22

It reminds me of Druids. Both past and present. :thinking:
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