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by radgareb » 09 Dec 2010, 10:56
I seek the face of the sun
where song to form joins
where in the completeness I find
The wholesome reality
of the want that's you.
It resides here where my heart
in dance, in flight, holds
the gathered images, the face
of what you bear and hold
Within the soul of me.
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by seabhac star » 17 Dec 2010, 16:59
Hello Radgareb,

This poem is beautiful and speaks of perhaps some void in need of being filled? I pray that the muse for this poem smiles on you. Peace

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