Spring is coming

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Spring is coming

Postby Mark B » 20 Feb 2011, 15:39

The year is turning, it's nearly here.
Listen, you'll hear it. Breath deep, you'll smell it.
Notice, and your sap will start to rise waking you from winters' slumber as
Hazel slackens into the warming air, the Robin tells the Blackbird
Spring is coming.
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Re: Spring is coming

Postby Kima » 20 Feb 2011, 22:51

Nice, effective short poem. You should use it to call people out in the street early in the morning :D

One small detail: I imagine you mean "breathe" with an "e"?
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