Can any one suggest a last line to this? As i need some thing to round off with..
Are you there. are you there?
All I feel now is dispare
the darkness has surrond me
but it don't scare
why don't you answer do you care?
If you are there then show me
into this void I do stare
This place where where?
My mind, It's my mind
I can travel there
Reality,
I can breath
I can smell the rain and feel the breeze
I can hear the song of springs free bees
I travel through the seasons
But It can't be touched
What on Earth is it.
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Re: question
by Wolf Maiden » 08 Apr 2011, 01:56
It is a start
A star watches for for me
A star watches for for me
See you on the light side of the moon :howl:
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Re: question
by Naleena » 26 Apr 2011, 05:58
My soul desires so much?
The trees reach out as silent witnesses always willing to listen to your troubled heart. Nature offers her ears to anyone who speaks into the omnipotant silence. There are places that wait for you. You are loved....you are wanted....you are cared for. You are not alone.....you are not alone.....you have never been alone.
-DAS
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