well

[Hennie]

my heart 's a heaven
a worm-hole
and a hell

my heart 's a tell-tale
a sing-song
and a loving-spell

my heart 's warm night
a summer breeze
a midnight-choir bell

my heart is still beating
thumping, pushing, rattling
my heart is still beating
and all is well

[wyeuro]

lovely hennie. a bit sad though - the first three lines have a very sweet poignancy and the last four bring you down with a bump - from the metaphysical, magical, poetic, shaman heart of the light body to the physical heart in the body and it's susceptibility to malfunction. perhaps i'd have liked a verse to link the two, lead in gently...? still it's lovely
wy

[Naleena]

my heart 's a heaven
a worm-hole
and a hell

I really like this, Hennie. A worm hole...a distortion in space and time....linking one place to another. There is a lot of meaning to be taken from this. Very deep when you think about it