Poem ^.^

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Poem ^.^

Postby illbehere » 12 Jun 2011, 11:57

i call it.. simply "Home" it represents my leaving my old roots of being a catholic and bringing in the new.

here i stand before you
knowing what i want to do
i lost my soul in a fire so cold
burned by the catholic three fold

now i sit and listen
to ancient storys told
no more bound to the ropes of life
a magical journey to end my strife

now i go to sleep
not a single religous peep
oh silence is golden
on the string of my chosen

of all paths it called to me
whispered sweet somethings in my ear
told me everything was meant to be
that the time of my spirit awakening was near

hear the wind rustling
sing along with the lute
oh olden times how i love thee
and a druid, i am to be.

(hope you enjoyed)

i write alot of peotry xD its like my favourite past time, i love to make my feelings known to others. so yeah :) bye :curtsey: :yay:
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Re: Poem ^.^

Postby Feona » 13 Jun 2011, 13:09

Keep writing down your words :)
I am walking on the path of soul - finding my light - making me whole

If we don't understand what the soul is telling us,
if we don't want to see the unseen,
if we carry on walking blindly through life -
without even seeing with the inner eye ...
then we will search for explanations,
then we will find ways of rationality,
then we will see the clarity of things -
and we will be frightened by the slightest signs of irrationality.
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Re: Poem ^.^

Postby illbehere » 21 Jun 2011, 21:36

thank you, i will :) i make up my peoms on the spot, pre written makes it seem rehearsed. raw is my favourite ^.^ but yeah ill write down everyone that i do. thanks again ;)
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Re: Poem ^.^

Postby Feona » 22 Jun 2011, 08:47

Like me - I just write what is there and don't sit upon it for weeks ;)
The words come floating in and want to be written down - that is how I do write my poems :)
I am walking on the path of soul - finding my light - making me whole

If we don't understand what the soul is telling us,
if we don't want to see the unseen,
if we carry on walking blindly through life -
without even seeing with the inner eye ...
then we will search for explanations,
then we will find ways of rationality,
then we will see the clarity of things -
and we will be frightened by the slightest signs of irrationality.
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