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Postby Hennie » 15 Jul 2011, 06:51

I've come home
to kiss the Sun
I''ve come home
to caress the Moon
I've come home

I've come home
to breathe in Air
I've come home
to touch the Earth
I've come home

I've come home
to loose my heart

I've come home
to stay
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Postby skydove » 15 Jul 2011, 11:10

I love the feeling of great calm and acceptance in your poem Hennie, it has the effect of making me pause and feel my centre.
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Postby Muddy Fox » 15 Jul 2011, 11:31

Yes, beautiful Hennie, I like it very much.
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Postby Hennie » 15 Jul 2011, 13:00

Thank you.
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Postby Night Owl » 15 Jul 2011, 14:02

Wonderful, Hennie!!!
Thank you so much,

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