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a new riddle.....

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 18 Mar 2012, 22:59

i can be troubled or calm,
thin or thick.
deep or shallow,
still or restless,
tortured or peaceful,
i can be interrupted
or i cannot,
i am the same every time you encounter me
but i am vastly different every time as well,
i exist for a few hours at a time,
but i also exist at all times in between
i am there when you need me but do not want me,
i am there when you want me and do not need me,
i am there when you do not want me nor need me.
sometimes i have a voice
sometimes i am silent
sometimes i am violent
sometimes i am still.
i am a part of all living things from the smallest grasses to the greatest celestial bodies.
what am I?

{note... i will post the answer in a few days........i am starting to develop my riddling so this is a trial of an original riddle and hopefully i have a good start.
thanks C.S.}
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby treegod » 19 Mar 2012, 09:47

Has it got anything to do with these?: :gloomy: :gulp: :hose: :adrift: :smell: :atlsalm: :fish: :dolphin:

And perhaps it makes a major component of these? (for good measure): :guinness: :bordeaux: :burgundy: :champ: :baileys: :mead: :beer: :java: :tea: :irishcoff: :martini: :chocmilk: :icetea: :latte: :shiner:
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 19 Mar 2012, 16:31

nope but good guessing....
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby skydove » 19 Mar 2012, 20:08

This is hard, I thought of things like Sleep and Movement, Consciousness even Death -I give up!
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 20 Mar 2012, 17:43

answer incoming tomorrow.............
just a little bit more time for people to post their guesses...
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Art » 21 Mar 2012, 00:28

Wind or air?
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 21 Mar 2012, 03:55

good guess art but sadly no..... hmmm.....just a few more hours....
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Skogsvandrare » 21 Mar 2012, 04:54

Time?
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 21 Mar 2012, 09:02

SKYDOVE..... your first instinct was ............................................CORRECT! the three terms applicable here are SLEEP,SLUMBER OR DORMANCY, since it is a natural part of any rhythm, or cycle in the known multiverse........ cheers more incoming soon.... :grin: i think it was a good one no?
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 21 Mar 2012, 09:04

although treegods answers can all be implicated in some way or another to these three things.... lol :grin: :-)
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby skydove » 21 Mar 2012, 09:48

Look forwards to more :yay:
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby treegod » 22 Mar 2012, 12:18

Crimson Stormfire wrote:although treegods answers can all be implicated in some way or another to these three things.... lol :grin: :-)


So many of those metaphors seemed "watery" in one way or another, lol :D
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby treegod » 22 Mar 2012, 23:42

Incidentally, I have been told it is International Water Day today (or something of the like). :adrift: :grin:
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Re: a new riddle.....

Postby Beorthwulf » 13 May 2012, 21:14

my initial thought was time...but after some deliberation and re-reading I think:
Dreams perhaps...
Which was first, is it darkness, is it light?

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