Hi Lughan, and thanks for posting this.
I like your themes of how time changes causes, deeds and people. Your lines are the 'right length' for easy reading and you move on from one idea before it becomes stale.
If you're interested in constructive criticism, let me know, but there's not much else I really have to say. I hope to see more of your works on here in the future.
--Although I try to thoroughly check my work, hilarious and non-sensical typos may result in longer posts due to a shoddy laptop keyboard--
--Chase the numinous. --