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Pan - Comments Welcome

Postby Sharonzak » 04 Aug 2012, 12:46

I am He of many names.
Called demonic, they tried to erase me.
But here again I stand before you.
As passion rises to blood and tears.
I hurtle through the dead of night.
For those of you who doubt my call.
I am the mighty Pan.
I am ALL.

I am the virile ecstasy of maleness, the naked, sweat-drenched breath on skin.
I am the temptation that licks your face.
Wild and free I stand at the crossroads; waiting.
I am the lust that pursues you to obsession.

I am He who stirs your dreams and conjures lovers at your command.
I am the fire in your belly, the race of your heart and the seed of your dreams.
I am the stallion, fuelled for the race, to course through your veins.
I am the silence at dusk, the intake of breath.

I am the Wild One.

I am He.

From The Greening of Man
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Postby Aphritha » 04 Aug 2012, 14:55

Love this!
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Postby seabhac star » 04 Aug 2012, 15:47

Pan, my man! Hello Sharonzak. :tiphat: I liked this poem, It makes me think of all the wildness that Pan represents. Thanks for sharing. :shake: -Roy
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Postby Sharonzak » 05 Aug 2012, 08:34

Isn't He gorgeous! He came in, flicking pheromones about, at that was one of the results!
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