Hiraeth (please feel free to comment)

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Hiraeth (please feel free to comment)

Postby penyou » 23 Oct 2012, 20:47

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Postby skydove » 24 Oct 2012, 13:36

I like the sentiments expressed and the imagery and the rhythm that is not quite standard.
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Postby Aphritha » 24 Oct 2012, 15:28

Lovely!
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