Moonleaf the Bard wrote:Hey Fox, I really like this poem. It's up to you but I advise you change the word "foam" in the first line to "sea-foam" just to make it clear to the reader from the off that you are imagining the shore for there is no clue in the title. And you need a question-mark further down where you ask yourself a question.
Hope you don't mind my saying that...and I only said it because the poem works for me.
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