I read your letters bound in box last night

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I read your letters bound in box last night

Postby Fox » 06 Mar 2013, 15:01

I read your letters bound in box last night,
and charted empire’s rise and swift decline;
the first with purple ink and blinkered sight,
declaring all your futures to be mine.

So full of news, and views, and words of love,
with heady scent of lavender and rose,
our flag of love flew high in blue above,
in winds of poetry and deathless prose.

But how at last we weakened in the van,
as frontiers buckled, shattered, fell;
the horde of doubt grew strong, and over-ran
Abandoned heart, left empty lifeless shell.

These war dispatches, written long ago, grown cold:
where is that soldier now, once passionate and bold?
yr pal, Fox

"So good luck came, and on my roof did light, like noiseless snow."
– Robert Herrick, from 'The Coming of Good Luck'
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Re: I read your letters bound in box last night

Postby Michael C. Page » 06 Mar 2013, 15:09

Whoa!

The FOX is back |-)

Good one Paul :applause:
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perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer.
Let him step to the music he hears,
however measured or far away."
- Thoreau

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Re: I read your letters bound in box last night

Postby Heddwen » 06 Mar 2013, 15:42

Love this one, Fox :)
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Re: I read your letters bound in box last night

Postby Aphritha » 06 Mar 2013, 17:19

Beautiful, yet sad..
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Re: I read your letters bound in box last night

Postby Fox » 06 Mar 2013, 17:24

Thanks Michael, Heddwen and Aphritha.

I was in two minds about putting something that wasn't "nature-driven" but what's more natural than faded love? Anyway, our bardic impulses take many forms. Sad love poetry is one of mine.
yr pal, Fox

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Re: I read your letters bound in box last night

Postby Aphritha » 06 Mar 2013, 17:27

Completely natural, and something I think we can all relate to.
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