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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby wyeuro » 31 Dec 2008, 08:34

and me, am i living, p'r'aps lurking, and why
have i fled from this forest? O with jaundiced eye
have i turned? have i spurned what once i knew
to be precious like liquor, like crystalline dew?
or have i returned to some arduous work
some onerous duty i just couldn't shirk,
or none of these things? oh, i don't really know,
how the long days have borne me along on a flow
of... work, yes, a little, of... thought, yes a lot
of art, music, business, mm, yes, and i got
embroiled in a minor community brawl,
and my neighbour then fractured her leg in a fall,
and since she'd been minding a sick neighbours' camel
that task fell to me, and as well as that mammal,
four chooks and a rooster well guarded by snakes
(this weather, they're active) and all for their sakes
i've been risking my life with the King Brown conversing
to just get them fed, very quickly reversing
away from the slide of the venomous beast
who I strongly suspect upon eggs likes to feast.

so as things settle down, i'll get back into form
and return to the board, alive, upright and warm!
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby RedKite » 31 Dec 2008, 18:27

  :yay:
I've just got an email, and I was quite shaken
Iambic Hexameter, 'less I'm mistaken,
has just poped up, in Poetic Conversations,
to break the long silence and wake up the nations

It seems your lifestyle has become quite chaotic
but you've still got feelings, not become robotic
So I wish your community, and ev'ry beast,
will now live happily at Two Oh Oh Nine's feast

I do hope it gets sorted, to give you a rest,
and may I now wish you, Wyeuro, all of the best
for the coming year. Not freezing like all of us
but in Oz with the snakes and the flies and the dust

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Varethius » 09 Aug 2009, 06:46

And never have I seen such skill.
written with but pen and quill.
you talented bards that put me to shame.
I wish I could be, skilled just the same.

New to this art, and talent of bards.
words are a thing, both soft and hard.
I'm slowly learning what you all mean.
when the Awen is flowing and free.

I sit and I think, I long to write.
To impress you elders through day and night.
If I recall how this thread did start.
Get with the program and do your part!
I want to sing of all things new.
From the river and the springtime dew.

To friends I've loved and friends I've lost.
Let your memories rest in dust.

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby serenarian » 11 Nov 2009, 23:12

We welcome you here, Varethius,
but alas, you do flatter us.
My rhyming talents do not stay,
instead preferring to run away.

I find your poem a delight,
while reading it this autumn night.
Away from this thread I have roamed,
but tonight's the night I journey home.

My work takes over most every thought
and comfort from it I have sought
How could I wander from the fire
that inspires Awen and desire?

Someone asked what rhymes with 'poetry'
the truth may be quite hard to see
We could ponder for eternity!
I think I'd rather climb a tree.

In branches high I'd sit and gaze
the turning leaves, the autumn days
are frosted with a winter chill
and all the world is calm and still

Alas! I have rambled far too long!
Now someone else can carry on.

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Fox of the Oaks » 28 Dec 2009, 07:17

Carry on, from this noble poetic throng?
My 'carry on' may spill forth wrong,
But from the heart I'll sound my song,
And write this down - It wont be long!

Flowing round such lights as Sun,
Stars, and Moon, and deeds well done.
Jeweled light beneath our feet,
The touch of dew so ever-sweet.

We humbly walk upon old Earth,
She loves us sweetly, oh so dearth!
Star-drops, Moon-drops, Icicles,
Peaceful chimes upon our souls.

And in the silent early morn,
In waves of sleep, wise dreams are born,
And from this lucid nightly vision,
We're borne upon lore if we dare listen.
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Rook » 28 Dec 2009, 19:26

Amazed I read your flowing verse
And tempted am to first rehease
The wordform i will place here on,
and hope to gain your praise anon.

Yet as I come to form my word
I feel that would be quite absurd
For conversation should free flow
so I will have a little go.

Rook am I a training bard
Am after Arwen searching hard.
Inspired by Goddess at the start
And late by she who has my heart
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby RedKite » 29 Dec 2009, 01:24

Some noble Bards and Birds of verse
come flocking back to break the curse
of yearly silence... Seems ages
since I last wrote on these pages

It's three hundred and sixty three
days since I let my words run free
to chat with others on this thread
Perhaps they though that I was dead!

This old bird just broke his tethers
'though I may be loosing feathers
I shall write words, I'll not linger
'though I still type with one finger

Not a good year for word and rhyme
My brain seemed locked most of the time
Try to forget this year... but then...
Looking forward to Twenty Ten
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Mellinda » 29 Dec 2009, 13:54

My first post here on this cold dark day

Would like to be in a nice warm space
I’ve Just found my old suitcase

Think Ill go to a nice warm place
Must pack everything, just in case

Oz sounds good is it a nice place?
Iv just heard there are spiders and snakes!

Think I’ll go unpack my old suitcase
Put the kitchen sink back in its place

I’ll just go and find a warm comfy space
Better of staying in my own familiar place

Won’t need my old suitcase
As I don’t much care for spiders and snakes


Sending, Awens Blessings free to all you don’t have to pay
Peace and love in the New Year that’s coming our way
All who except Awen’s love, be guided on this new day
Drink deep the gift of life; spread sunshine come what may
New Year with new things to experience each day
New friends to meet, old friends to greet
Old and young, sharing every wondrous day
Excitedly anticipating love, joy and sorrow
Learning from life the lessons for tomorrow
All its gifts yours for life not just to borrow
Looking forward to 2010, and all that it brings
Love and peace to all and a Happy New Year
Your as old as your soul age not your body. I was born as Sagittarius was rising.
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Fox of the Oaks » 06 Feb 2010, 08:58

'Happy new year!'
Still rings in my ear,
As friends I know well,
Near China did dwell,
Till they came here,
To live with heart clear,
Australia now,
In Summer full power,
And I'm thinking still,
Up north, snow-melt will,
And I noticed this thread,
Seemed frozen dead,
As new-year has passed,
A month or so past,
(Chinese New Year is soon
Upon coming new-moon)
Yet Poetry is flowing free,
So let this stream continue be,
Melting icy lands into words,
Stream enlivened, sun-lit, reverbs!
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Mellinda » 24 Feb 2010, 21:50

Oh will this snow every melt
My feet are so cold Iv just felt
And my fingers are all numb
My nose is dripping I have a cold
Think its time I got back in my bed
My head is throbbing and my nose is so red

The snow was fun for a while
Now it’s just getting a bit of a trial
Oh well ill go get the garden brush
Once more ill clear the front drive
So the postman doesn’t fall on his arse
He’s battled thought all the bad weather
To deliver the parcels and post

Buses also made their rounds
Pity the dustmen couldn’t
Four weeks and no bins emptied
Don’t know why they failed to call
Must have been to cold for them
To make they’re way to our door
Should have had their porridge
Pore delicate things

So looking forward to the summer holiday
I need to see and feel the sun
Going to the summer lands of the Celts
When this snow finally melts
Oh well its time for me to say goodnight

Peace and blessing, love to all

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby serenarian » 05 Mar 2010, 13:58

Sitting here lost, on this bright springtime day
I want to be outside and running away
From the chains that keep me here, locked in routine
With my eyes full of dew at the sights I have seen

Seeking solace, I find myself here in this thread
Inspired and pleased by the words I have read
Iambic pentameter leads me to smile
Forgetting the worries I have for a while

Lethargic? Not Bardic, I fear and dread
But so many poesies flow through my head
I cannot resist taking time out to write
From the deepest darkness emerges great light

So I thank you, my friends, from the depths of my heart
Today is the day I could make a new start
Time previously drifting has become better spent
From my heart to yours, my gratitude sent
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Jingle » 05 Mar 2010, 19:10

Serenarian, I quite agree
This meter fills my heart with glee
The work is hard and stressful here
And only gone one sixth the year.

Making an effort to write each week
Makes my outlook not so bleak
I've been concentrating on skaldic meter
In winter cold right by the heater.

I finished one the other day
I may post it by the way
About a mountain way out west
A place my heart still loves the best.

So look for it if you'd like to see
In the forum set for poesy.
And find a rhyme for poetry
To set my heart to roam and free.
Light,

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Fox » 24 Apr 2010, 22:22

Find a rhyme for the poet-tree?
Ironic rhymeless rhymeful word
It shouldn't ought to act that way
Don't it know we want to play?
It has to go and be absurd
But think of all we owe it - see?
If you just sneak around it so
The poet-tree might be asleep
And we can catch it unawares
And lay our little bardic snares
Then rising from its dreaming deep
Find it's been rhymed, will it or no.

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby serenarian » 05 May 2010, 12:54

Oh Fox, your words are just the thing
To make me crack a cheesy grin
Your use of meter so inspired
Poetic voice is never tired

Today I sit procrastinating
Finding this so captivating
Reminding me of Druid heart
From which I've spent too long apart

I always seem to write herein
When lesson planning's wearing thin
So friends, again I thank you from my soul
For showing me I can be whole.
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Ra3vyn » 12 Jun 2010, 16:09

Oh hark! Can it be true?
Tis already the month of June!

The wheel of the year does slowly turn
or quickly, whichever you discern

So quiet since the last reply
I thought I'd give the muse a try

Awen shines through I'm glad to say
I can finally contribute today!

Now just eagerly anticipating
Next poetic undertaking ;)
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Nikki 2 » 28 Jun 2010, 17:29

With July now in sight
Thought I'd try the Bard limelight
And post a message on this board
And hope to hit a dulcet chord!
This rhyming lark is quite a challenge
When through a book you've had to scavenge.
I hope I've got the right idea
Even though not quite Shakespeare
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Jingle » 28 Jun 2010, 17:53

Welcome, welcome, Nikki 2
With spiral avatar in blue.
It's just the thing to get me going
On a day I wish 'twere snowing.

Strange that in the winter bleak
We wish for any warmer streak
But now when June becomes July
Thermometers climb up too high.

So grab a drink of lemonade
And find a tree to grab some shade
And I'll be watching here for you
And lovely avatar in blue.
Light,

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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby Nikki 2 » 28 Jun 2010, 23:26

Jingle, to you I can relate -
Always Bard but now Ovate -
In the depths of winter's freeze
We yearn that warming summer's breeze;
Yet in the sultry July sun
That which we yearned for now we shun.
Instead we dream of darker nights,
Mistletoe and snowball fights :grin:
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby wyeuro » 29 Jun 2010, 06:41

alas, no snowballs over here,
but freezing frosts, all crisp and clear.
and if such icy chills you crave
i know of some that you could have:
the chill that nibbles at my toes
when walking in the wind that blows,
the icy blast that howls about
the door whenever i go out,
there's cold enough to cool your heat
just in the ice-blocks of my feet! :-(
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Re: Poetic Conversations

Postby treegod » 29 Jun 2010, 08:34

Well this looks like a funny place.
Perhaps a bit of saving grace?
To rhyme rhyme in poems I scarcely do,
But I like to experiment too.
I've only seen the last two posts,
And so skipped the initial host.
My apologies to one and all,
If rules here are to stop it fall,
That I adhered to have not,
Which might be a little rot.
I shall go back to the first page,
And see where it started in its age. :tiphat:
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