In the Space of Time

[Fae]

In the space of time, you took control, of my mind and my soul.
I realize now that you never really cared in that way,
You knew what to say, to take it all away.
You took away the things that make me who I am,
my self-respect, my confidence, my esteem.

In the space of time, you took control, of my mind and my soul.
You thought I was there, to make you feel great,
All you had for yourself was hate.
I have fought a long hard fight,
I need to be me, that is my right.

In the space of time, you took control, of my mind and my soul.
The person I am is not bad,
Sometimes happy, sometimes sad.
I have to travel alone,
To find out I can do it on my own.
I know today, in the space of time,
I have control of my soul and my mind.

[OakWyse]

Powerfully done, Ce'Nedra!

OakWyse

[chalcedoni]

a beautiful offering of the soul. thank you so much for sharing that, my friend. it blesses me to read it.

hugs,
chalci

[Fae]

Thank you Chalci and Oakwyse.



I appreciate your encouragement....

[Beith]

That is wonderful Ce'Nedra...and healing, don't you find?

To express feelings and thoughts through poetry, is balm indeed for the soul and a refuge for a troubled heart. It is a great way to 'let go'.

Well done!

whoever inspired this, may he know the greatness of his loss of you; and may you recognize the wonderful person that is you who shines out to us on this board.

Well done!

Beith xxx

[Fae]

Beith; you understand!!!!

It took me a while to be able to get up the nerve to post this, as you say, it is my heart and soul.... :crying:

It is through a very loving new partner and lots of inner searching, that I have come to realize the exact nature of his loss and of my own value

Once again, thanks so much....

[lupiana]

Speachless, beyond what Oak said - powerful.

[Flidais]

Ce Nedra thatwas truly a piece of your heart, and is very powerful as such things are, when we leave a small bit of us in them.
I hope it has helped in your healing, I find it writing a good way of getting go, as Beith has said. Great Poem!

[Kaya-Nita]

it looks as you put good use to bad feelings. Releasing them is never easy.
Starting a new will build strength in you,I have faith you can do it.