Stag Song

Stag Song

Postby Dawnaly » 31 Aug 2004, 18:04

Stag Song

See the Mountains standing, strong
See the Trees rooted deep, growing tall
Hear the Wind rushing through
Hear the Water tumbling over the Rock down to the Sea
See the Earth, sweet and round,
Spinning
Spinning
Spinning with you and with me gliding 'round the Sun
As the Stars sing our song

See the Birdwing brush the Sky
See the Clouds thick and wet, streaming by
Hear the crackle of Flame
As the Fire circles, licking the Grass, kissing the Seed
See the Moon, Milk of Light
Dreaming
Dreaming
Dreaming with you and with me secret stories of
Growing Peace deep within
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Postby EarthWard » 31 Aug 2004, 19:27

Great work!!! I could hear the music that goes with it.

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Postby Cerridwen » 31 Aug 2004, 19:56

That is beautiful
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Postby Ruthie » 31 Aug 2004, 21:20

Dawnaly,
That was very beautiful, very inspirational!
Thank-you for posting it!
MC
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Postby Fialka » 31 Aug 2004, 23:03

Very nice! Thanks for sharing! :-D
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Postby Sophia Zoe » 01 Sep 2004, 19:02

Earthward could hear the music--I felt as if I were spinning through space!

That's what a good poem does--take you with it.

Thank you for taking us along!

SZ
The mountains have always been the timeless dwelling place of the great sages;
both wise men and sages have made the mountains their abode, their own body and mind.
--Dogen Zenji


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Postby Kaya-Nita » 04 Sep 2004, 23:25

Definatly i liked how it flowed very smoothly and very refreshing :hug: :brnbear: :awen:
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