As the night falls

As the night falls

Postby Karlo » 09 Sep 2004, 11:06

As the night falls,
And the sun goes down.
The moon shoots up,
And the comets fly round.
I wonder how,
How it could be,
That I met they.
For in this world,
And in this life,
It is your smile that makes the light.
You are my sun,
You are my moon,
I hope to see you very soon...

Karlo 02-02-02
User avatar
Karlo
 
Posts: 87
Age: 31
Joined: 05 Aug 2004, 21:00
Location: netherlands
Gender: Male

Postby Kaya-Nita » 09 Sep 2004, 13:50

Very sweet plea Karlo. i like it :-D :brnbear: :awen:
User avatar
Kaya-Nita
 
Posts: 988
Joined: 25 Sep 2003, 04:11
Location: From under the hill and over the hill sipping on elderberry wine

Postby Night Hawk » 10 Sep 2004, 01:51

A beautiful poem, Karlo!!!!! :awen::coll:
:coll: Current read: Earthsea TrilogyUrsula K. LeGuin
http://www.midrealm.org/starleafgate/
http://www.witchesofwindsor.com
User avatar
Night Hawk
 
Posts: 2997
Age: 40
Joined: 17 Feb 2003, 00:45
Location: Through the Stones in the 13th Century
Gender: Female


Return to Bardic Offerings Archive subforum

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests