Twilight (Poetry)

Twilight (Poetry)

Postby Fae » 14 Sep 2004, 12:37

Twilight

Come stroll with me through the mist,
to my faerie garden where we can sit.
During that space between day and night,
tis the magical moment of twilight.

Sitting, waiting, patiently for the fairies to appear,
to watch them fly and dance on the air.
Hush, look, up there in the branches,
See they are doing their faerie dances.

Oh what joy the fae little ones bring,
when they allow us to see and hear them sing.
See them, fluttering by silver, gold and blue,
Faeries all, with their own unique hue.

Leaping, fluttering, twisting and weaving,
the circle of life; loving, loss and grieving.
During that space between day and night,
tis the magical moment of twilight.
Peace from the branches of the Mighty Oak
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Postby EarthWard » 14 Sep 2004, 16:49

During that space between day and night,
tis the magical moment of twilight.


Wonderful Ce'Nedra!!!
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Postby Loosh » 15 Sep 2004, 19:16

Ce'Nedra
Your poem left me wanting more. What a lovely glimpse of the fairy world!
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Postby Merlyn » 15 Sep 2004, 19:28

:applause: :coad:

The words dance a dream
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ac o wybod, gwybod yn gyfiawn;
ac o wybod yn gyfiawn ei garu;
ac o garu, caru Duw.
Duw a phob daioni.
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Postby Kat Lady » 16 Sep 2004, 02:10

[/quote]During that space between day and night, tis the magical moment of twilight.

Love the 'tweens myself. Wonderful!
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Postby Piastra » 16 Sep 2004, 06:40

indeed, it is lovely, my sweet freiend. you are such a poetess...

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Postby Ruthie » 16 Sep 2004, 22:44

I also have seen the wee folk at twilight. Your poem is spot-on, and beautifully written. Thank-you very much for posting it!
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Postby Niht-Wyrd » 17 Sep 2004, 00:24

Beautifully written Ce'Nedra, it dances around that magical time wonderfully!

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Postby Saille-Panthera » 19 Sep 2004, 11:17

I really want to stroll with you, and watch the faeries :-D
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Postby Jeb » 23 Sep 2004, 13:23

Sitting, waiting, patiently for the fairies to appear,


This is great! Like sitting waiting patiently for stars to appear in the sky. Love it.
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Postby Fae » 24 Sep 2004, 12:17

Thank you everyone, for your kind words, and your encouragement. I may get to be a poet yet!
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Postby Kaya-Nita » 26 Sep 2004, 02:19

Again as always you never fail to impress me with how you draw such a lovely picture. :D :-D :brnbear: :awen:
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Postby Draghkar » 30 Sep 2004, 11:38

touching :)
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Postby Robb Hawklord » 30 Sep 2004, 12:13

Ce'Nedra it is bee-yew-tea-full. Love it

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Postby Fae » 30 Sep 2004, 12:29

ooooh :oops: ttthhhank you Hawky. I am glad you like it.

I like your choice of avatar...that other one (please don't be angry anyone) sucked...
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Postby Robb Hawklord » 30 Sep 2004, 12:46

Well not getting political we all know he sucks :grin: and thanks too about the avatar, I engraved it myself, on a lovely piece of Amber about 1.5 inch long, I threaded it with string as I wanted to keep it simple, the cloth behind I hope to make into a Robe, cannot cope with white!!

I have 2 pieces of the cloth, which is a pir of curtains, lol, the other I intend to make into a full wrap on/around Kilt - the over the shoulder genuine kind but I'll do without pleats as its not quite wide enough to pleat :mracorn: :oops: get the drift :lol: But should I ever get back up to the Homeland I'll get the Clan Tartan, but which clan as I know 3 that the family belong to, plus the right to wear the Stuart Tartans, and also the Gordon Tartans - in total about 50 different ones to choose from :???:

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Postby lupiana » 30 Sep 2004, 13:12

Painted with a magical brush, in colors that twinkle like night's first stars! Wonderful, hon!
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