Samhain Circle (Poetry)

Samhain Circle (Poetry)

Postby Crow » 16 Sep 2004, 17:07

Samhain Circle

I sat and read on my back deck
Smoke rose from ritual fire
I thought about the time of year
When the summer starts to tire

With long-sleeved shirt upon my back
I watch the green leaves fading
And think on what they're telling me
Of birth and death and aging

If life in one great circle moves
Where is the start and finish?
How then can Samhain be the end?
Must it not, too, replenish?

A babe is born, an elder dies
Harvest's last sheaf is taken
The wheat becomes a fresh-baked loaf
In death it's not forsaken

The leaves will fall in golden piles
Strong arms and rakes we'll need
The rotting leaves become the mulch
On which tender shoots will feed

And what of friends and loved ones passed
Beyond my sight and hearing?
Do I not have good reason then
For why my eyes are tearing?

Like those golden piles of autumn
Their spirits have been transformed
I feel their love banked round my feet
There to keep me safe and warm

And so I struggle but can't see
Where a circle ends or starts
It gives me comfort when I think
How our love shall not depart

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Postby Loosh » 16 Sep 2004, 18:50

Wow! A very touching memorial to the ancestors! Well done, Crow!
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Postby Selene » 16 Sep 2004, 18:59

It brings tears to my eyes, Crow. So true!
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Postby Ruthie » 16 Sep 2004, 23:01

Oh Crow, now I'm blubbering mess all over my keyboard. Your poem is so emotional, so evocative. May I print it out for my poem-book?
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Postby Piastra » 16 Sep 2004, 23:08

that was beautiful, my feathered friend. i was just reading and responding to dohbran's poem, that the spirit of the ancestors are central to samhuinn, as far as i'm concerned. a wonderful piece - as usual.

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Postby Kat Lady » 16 Sep 2004, 23:50

Words cannot express how I feel about this peoem, Crow.

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Postby Niht-Wyrd » 17 Sep 2004, 00:28

Wonderful Crow, absolutely wonderful. The ancestors stand proud.

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Postby EarthWard » 17 Sep 2004, 15:42

:raven: :raven: :raven: :raven:

Crow I don't even have a good enough vocabulary to say how much I liked this poem.
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Postby Crow » 17 Sep 2004, 16:55

Thanks everybody :mracorn:

Fire up your printer, Moon Cloud. I'd be honored to be in your poem book.

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Postby Dobhran » 17 Sep 2004, 23:00

Great work Crow!
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Postby Azrienoch » 17 Sep 2004, 23:39

I absolutely adore literature that seems to bring the visualisation of both the literal and metaphorical meanings into the mind very easily. You did this superbly, and you were able to portray your emotions as only the most exemplary art does, forcing the observer directly into your mind and heart. Well done!
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Postby Saille-Panthera » 18 Sep 2004, 18:32

Beautiful, it makes me feel sad and happy at the same time :-D
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Postby Jeb » 23 Sep 2004, 12:27

I really love the true-to-real-life elements in this poem, Crow. Brilliant. Rakes, long-sleeve shirts, sitting on the deck... these grab me so much more than what I thought would have come from the title "Samhain Circle". Well done.
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Postby Kaya-Nita » 26 Sep 2004, 02:46

This very touching Hun i really like this very very much :D :-D :fire: :brnbear: :awen:
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