oaken wrote:I've never heard of the tanka, Caritas but will go and look it up now. That was lovely.
carragh wrote:well, we can only hope it was written FROM the throes of passion, and not IN it. smile. it might have proven otherwise distracting. however it was written, it is certainly a lovely, and sensual piece. thank you.
Kaya-Nita wrote:Now that was very errotic and nicely done, i think i need a ciggerette now thanks.
Jeb wrote:Wow! Very passionate indeed! I really enjoyed this poem... but since I don't smoke, I'm gonna go get a glass of cold water instead.
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