A mental picture of a druid (light-hearted poetry)

A mental picture of a druid (light-hearted poetry)

Postby Underground River » 26 Sep 2004, 15:56

I have a picture in my mind
It doesn't fit all druid kind
But it's the druid I want to see
The druid who would be like me
Twould be an elf so tall and slim
Upon who's face would be a grin
He would never feel the need
For wine or whisky, beer or mead
He'd wear a robe of the lightest silk
The colour of good rich sweet milk
He'd have no shoes upon his feet
He'd walk bare-foot in rain and sleet
He'd skip along the forest floor
Or run beside the ocean's shore
He'd sleep high up in a tree
He'd have a cat for company
He'd sometimes roam the woods at night
But also do so in daylight
He'd have a staff of mighty oak
All carved with runes which would invoke
Great awe in all those he met
A staff nobody would forget
He'd hold it up to the sky
And sing a song of time gone by
He'd really know his history
From ancient times to modernity
He'd be so kind and good and wise
His talents would be of giant size
He'd teach all children to love the woods
To plant as many trees as they could
This is the druid that I see
When I let myself think of how they should be.

Note: I don't want all druids to be like this, and the fact that he is male and not female doesn't mean anything. I simply needed a gender so I could choose which pronoun to use. :)
Copyright by Green Druid September 26, 2004.
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Postby Night Hawk » 26 Sep 2004, 23:01

:awen::awen::awen:
:applause::applause::applause:

LOVE this poem!
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Postby Underground River » 26 Sep 2004, 23:22

Thank you, NH. I am glad you liked my poem. :) :o
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Postby Oaken » 27 Sep 2004, 11:52

:-D This is lovely, your personal feelings of what being a druid would entail. Very nice poem :sunfl:
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Postby Caritas » 27 Sep 2004, 12:48

And who said humor is not one of the more valuable commodities on earth? :lol:

Really enjoyed it.
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Postby Kaya-Nita » 28 Sep 2004, 08:49

Now that was very funny i loved the way you also kept the tempo and flow,very nicely done. :peace: :brnbear: :awen:
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Postby Fae » 28 Sep 2004, 13:02

That was very well written as well as very funny. :o
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Postby Underground River » 28 Sep 2004, 13:17

Ah, we have another Canadian. :grin: I'm too lazy to find that mapleleaf emoticon. :lol: Glad you liked my poem...I am finding nowadays that after I write something, I start hating it which didn't used to happen to me all the time. :o I guess I was overly confident before.
Anyway, thanks for the compliments, everybody.
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Postby Jeb » 04 Oct 2004, 03:32

This is great GD! I'd love to sleep in a tree. Great stuff.

I think your hating your poem after writing it means that you're just beginning to become more critical of what you write or how you write it. I don't know for sure but I figure this is a good thing. It may inspire us to write better poetry. But at any rate, I wouldn't let it get you down. Just keep writing.

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Postby Underground River » 04 Oct 2004, 05:04

Sleeping in a tree? I'd be afraid of falling out! :o
Oops, not surprised...do we have a scared emoticon? Thanks for the mapleleaf...
Glad you liked my poem.
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Postby Branbeith » 04 Oct 2004, 23:48

beautiful imagery...Interesting character...Maybe to be expanded into a story? :)
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Postby FallingLeaves » 07 Oct 2004, 19:29

Greatly enjoyed this one..loved the flow......thank you UR
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Postby Unikorn » 08 Oct 2004, 04:07

Wonderful piece of work - thank you for sharing, it made me smile and feel good all over, like a jaunt in the woods :) Love your imagery
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Postby EarthWard » 21 Oct 2004, 00:00

Great Job green druid.
Thanks for letting me see your druid.

He would never feel the need
For wine or whisky, beer or mead
He'd wear a robe of the lightest silk
The colour of good rich sweet milk


That was my favorite part. It shows that he does not lust for anything
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Postby Underground River » 21 Oct 2004, 21:36

No, no, no, he lusts for good rich sweet milk! :grin:
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