The Grove (poetry)

The Grove (poetry)

Postby Underground River » 29 Sep 2004, 18:50

Yes, I am going to do this again...here's some more for all the poor souls who can't possibly read all this stuff! :grin: Seriously, if you are too busy to ocmment that's cool with me.
The Grove

[This is a description of what my grove would be if I had one and could choose any kind of tree...just another of my mind(less) journeys!]

An autumn day
I would collect the seeds
Put them in my pocket
Take them home
I would plant them
And if they grew
I would love them over the winter
I would sing to them in my mind
I would know them while they yet remained small
Oak and maple and apple trees
Little seedlings
Little trees.
In the springtime
When the leaves appear
When the flowers promise to bloom
When the rain starts to fall instead of snow
I would go outside
And find a sacred spot
I would take my young trees
Would plant them in the ground
Give them water
Let them feel the air
Let them be embraced
By the good Earth
I would think of fire
As I planted them
How the fire would be their will, their spirits
But would never touch their substance
I would say to my dear trees
As I planted each one
"Here is the water, that you may drink
Here is the earth to hold your roots so dear
Here be the air, the wind, the life
And I give you this fire
That your soul may burn bright
May you grow tall and straight
May your years be long and happy
May you know the sunshine and also the rain
We are both young
Both very green
May we grow and learn together
May we share what we have seen
May we always love each other
Even when we disagree
You are my awen
My dearest little tree."
I would see them through the summer
And right into the fall
Deep into the winter
Through the seasons all
I would rejoyce with their blooming
And also when leaves fall
When apples came I would pick them
And give them away
That people might taste their goodness
And so my grove would be
A sanctuary for all creatures
A place of never-ending peace
I'd also plant trees in rememberance
Of those who have met death
In respect for my dear ancestors
And for those I knew before they died
This includes people and pets
And people I never even met
But who gave me inspiration
I would plant for each of them a tree
And so my grove would grow
And pretty soon
You wouldn't be able to tell it from a forest.
(The part about fire not touching them embodies my hope that they would never be caught in a forest fire!)
This poem was inspired by a lot of different things I read on the net including some tree-planting rituals. I hope I haven't made a total mess of everything I have read. This poem is kind of a collection of a lot of things all tossed together.
Copyright by Green Druid September 29, 2004.
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Postby Branbeith » 29 Sep 2004, 19:23

Beautiful, Green Druid. You capture the sacredness of the tree planting and grove creating wonderfully. Keep writing!! :raven:
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Postby Ruthie » 29 Sep 2004, 19:30

This brought a tear to my eye.
This one in particular shows a deep understanding of the nature of cycles, and the cycles of nature. Something that my "snapshot"-style life sometimes lacks.
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Postby Underground River » 29 Sep 2004, 19:55

Nature of cycles and cycles of nature? Nice phrase! :grin: I am glad you liked it MC.
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Postby Loosh » 29 Sep 2004, 20:27

Very healing this poem!
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Postby Merlyn » 30 Sep 2004, 00:48

Really great! Underground River
Another favorite I will treasure.
You have invented a new kind of poetry in this, a dance of time.
Celtic tree planting for the elders who pass is something I do too.
I think you have really made this work

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Postby Night Hawk » 30 Sep 2004, 01:49

BEAUTIFUL poem! :coad::coad::coad:
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Postby lupiana » 30 Sep 2004, 01:57

A dedicated grove, filled with nurturing nature, the touch of elements, and a subtle kick in the butt to give these poems the reading they deserve! And it is like a dance, I could feel the warmth of the fire as if it were represented by the love you held for nature. Well done!
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Postby Underground River » 30 Sep 2004, 02:18

Thank you, Merlyn, NightHawk and Lupiana!
I am glad you liked this poem. I am very tired right now and can't write worth a darn. :)
Oh and where was the kick in the behind? I missed that in my own poem! :grin:
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Postby lupiana » 30 Sep 2004, 02:20

If this is the kind of work you do when you're tired, I'd love to see you well rested!
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Postby Underground River » 30 Sep 2004, 02:26

Er...I meant I'm tired now and not while I wrote the poem. :grin:
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Postby Kaya-Nita » 30 Sep 2004, 09:23

i really like this poem showing your connection, so at this time your Grove remains in your head one day it will be a fact.

Just push your wish to a plan. Find a bit of earth that cries for a tree's presence. If you speak to schools or park officals they usually are very open to the idea of tree's being planted as well as we have donated tree's to my daughter's high school and they in turn used it for their agiculture and bio classes so not only did we achieve our goal to plant more but gave a school lession for others as well.

i too wish one day for my very own Grove but have to settle on planting where i can. Did you also consider growing some dwarf tree's for indoors so you can make an indoor Grove too. Again i wish i had the space. Just some ideas for ya hun is all. :-D :peace: :brnbear: :awen:
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Postby Underground River » 30 Sep 2004, 15:48

Thanks for the ideas, Kaya-Nita.
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I have read some of the stuff on the OBOD site and they do mension getting your school or park to let you plant trees. I will have to research this some more...
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Postby gandalf2004 » 30 Sep 2004, 17:40

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Postby Alferian » 30 Sep 2004, 18:15

Beautiful poem, my dear. You are too self-effacing. It resonated with a number of things in my own life. Just yesterday I pulled some seed pods off a Linden tree with the intent to plant them in pots. Last winter my daughter and I planted the apple seeds from an apple she ate and this summer we put the seedlings in the ground in our garden.

A lovely dream we probably all share, that grove. I got the bit about fire.


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Postby Underground River » 30 Sep 2004, 20:40

Can I call you Johny Appleseed? :grin: Just kidding...seriously, thanks for the compliments! :)
I have a tendency to try and explain everything I write...I should have realized that most people probably know what I meant about fire... :oops:
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