Poetic Rhino

Poetic Rhino

Postby mandahr » 05 Oct 2004, 00:44

Samhain

A youthful memory conjures the past
of pumpkins and candy that didn’t last.

Like most that age I didn’t know
of the rhythmic ebb of the seasonal flow.

When fall’s first frost made the colors run
the divine and the living were becoming one.

As my age and wisdom and experience grew
I realized just how little I knew.

What’s said and done in the place I’m now in
I know it all starts and ends with Samhain.

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Postby Kat Lady » 05 Oct 2004, 00:50

Woooooo! Good Job, Rhino! Encore!

(You even rhymed it. I am so proud of you...)
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Postby lupiana » 05 Oct 2004, 00:53

Rhino and wife
Are poets fine
With work much better
Than ever was mine!

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Postby Branbeith » 05 Oct 2004, 01:33

Hey Rhino!! Excellent job!! Keep writing and who knows
you might speak in rhymes all the time!! :o
(maybe now you won't hate my alliteration so much!!) :raven:
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Postby Underground River » 05 Oct 2004, 01:35

I'm very tired right now so my thoughts aren't flowing right...but that was great! Just wanted to tell you that. I remember well the candy that didn't last. :o
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Postby Caritas » 05 Oct 2004, 03:05

youth and experience, eh? :D

very nicely done.

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Postby Ruthie » 05 Oct 2004, 21:21

Forsooth!
And very well put, also.
How we focus on samhuinn so hard, and focus on the ancestors, and forget our own past at this time of year.
Quite refreshing!
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Postby colm » 13 Oct 2004, 22:05

This evokes many memories of years passed. Thank you it is a terrific piece!

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Postby Jeb » 21 Oct 2004, 02:05

This really rang true for me. As a kid I didn't have any idea about the TRUE meaning of Halloween... I think kids need a Linus under a spot light to explain.


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