Lily Tear

Lily Tear

Postby grey helm » 18 Oct 2004, 23:53

Abstain untill the lily petals cup in chaos all in the vain offering of a tear like rain drop, like the metaphorical huming of a metranome the fences of failure or those past mistakes come circle round like that of the dafodills.
Resist past redemption yet in that final minute the erge to say sorry the erge to see the snow again or feel the sun well that erge has kept the red rivers of my body safe, some things are explained only in the movements of earthquakes the lily petal can make more sense to me than any man on this earth.
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Postby Night Hawk » 22 Oct 2004, 02:37

I LOVE lilies! Especially the stargazer ones! :rainbow::star:
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Postby Jeb » 22 Oct 2004, 02:52

grey helm,

Another very powerful poem. Excellent.

Let us be always on the lookout for those fine things in life that do indeed keep the red rivers of our bodies safe and keep the dark reaches of our spirits from overwhelming the lighter side entirely. As long as there is a spark, the fire can never go out.

Thanks so much for sharing this.
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