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Postby Robb Hawklord » 19 Oct 2004, 00:15

A short poem for you, I have illustrated it and due to size have linked it rather than display it here.

So if you click HERE you'll see it

Hawky
She's the goddess of love
The goddess in green
The goddess of all
That I've ever seen
The goddess of hope
The goddess in brown
The goddess of all
That you've burned to the ground

Maid Of The River - The Levellers
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Postby SpiritHealer » 19 Oct 2004, 01:30

This is truly a visual and verbal delight, Robb Hawklord.
Very moving.
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Postby Branbeith » 19 Oct 2004, 02:41

Wow It reads like the song of Taliesin. Excellent.
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Postby Robb Hawklord » 19 Oct 2004, 14:34

You 2 guys cant be serious. I had the Picture, the Afon Glaslyn near Beddgelert, North Wales. The words came to me when i thought of what to do with the Picture

Hawky
She's the goddess of love
The goddess in green
The goddess of all
That I've ever seen
The goddess of hope
The goddess in brown
The goddess of all
That you've burned to the ground

Maid Of The River - The Levellers
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Postby Kaya-Nita » 19 Oct 2004, 14:43

Yes they are it is absolutely breath takeing, i love poetry with imagery too if that is even how ya spell that.

Very excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :rose: :rose: :rose: :hug: :brnbear: :awen:
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Postby Robb Hawklord » 19 Oct 2004, 16:24

Thank you Kaya-nita, I see you've turned into a river as well :grin:

There is a special force in this River. The Afon Glaslyn runs through Bedgellert, from a Lake near Dinas Emrys - supposed retreat and stronghold of Vortigern. There is also an underground pool in Dinas Emrys, which no doubt flows in to it.

Merlin "I can see things others cannot. Beneath the mountains of Dinas Emrys I have seen two dragons, one red, one white... The white dragon represents the Saxons and the red dragon represents the Britons. The white dragon is the stronger of the two but the red dragon will have his day... There shall be a King after you who will drive out the Saxons and bring a time of peace and his name will be Arthur."


Hawky
She's the goddess of love
The goddess in green
The goddess of all
That I've ever seen
The goddess of hope
The goddess in brown
The goddess of all
That you've burned to the ground

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Postby Ruthie » 19 Oct 2004, 21:31

Very most excellently wonderful!
Thanks Robb!
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Postby EarthWard » 20 Oct 2004, 23:39

Love it, Robb!

May the River flow through us all.

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