Falling Leaves (Poem)

Falling Leaves (Poem)

Postby Romelia » 23 Oct 2004, 20:32

Falling Leaves

The Sweet dank earth,
With winters chill clung to the breeze.
Inward we now look; inward its does not freeze.
Our thoughts at rest, our hearts are at ease.

A time to take stock; on what has been reaped.
A time of transition as day turns to night.
It’s the time of our Ancestors,
The time we unite; among autumns falling leaves.


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Postby Arden » 23 Oct 2004, 22:24

The first line sets a tone of pensivity (is that a word) and reflection. Thank you.
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Postby Kat Lady » 23 Oct 2004, 23:32

A time of transition...

Wonderfully put! Thank you!
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Postby SidheAingeal » 24 Oct 2004, 06:01

Beautiful imagery.

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Postby Robb Hawklord » 25 Oct 2004, 13:03

It certainly puts the Samhain into Autumn, you have captured the essence of both in such a short, but marvellous piece

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The goddess in green
The goddess of all
That I've ever seen
The goddess of hope
The goddess in brown
The goddess of all
That you've burned to the ground

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