Just playing with words

Just playing with words

Postby Willowhawk » 02 Nov 2004, 02:04

Fly
Flying
high above the night
I soar
in dreams I soar
and touch
the wind as it tears past
the silver rain kisses
my wings
(not tangible, not touchable
but metaphysical and always there)
and I glide
through freedom unknown in daylight

Sit
Sitting all day
at a desk
in a classroom
in my car
the rain
(grey now, not the bright
silver in my dreams)
beats on my windscreen
hearkens to another existence
I live to dream
Willow the still inkless

Peace over anger. Honour over hate. Strength over fear.

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Postby EarthWard » 03 Nov 2004, 00:41

Willow Hawk I think you are on the verge of some really great poetry.
You are your own best muse and I can't wait to read it.
"Rise and rise again, until lambs become lions."
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Postby Willowhawk » 03 Nov 2004, 00:49

:oops: Thank you. It felt good to get *something* out! :)
Willow the still inkless

Peace over anger. Honour over hate. Strength over fear.

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