Winter flight

Winter flight

Postby Snowbird » 09 Nov 2004, 16:37

Free as a bird my spirit soars high
Spurred on by the calls of the summer guests as they fly
South and leave their summer paradise
Which is wrought by Winters cold harsh ice.

Bound though I was by Summers firey chains
as the last leaves fall I can breathe again
The sun is gentler and faids into darkness
Bringing peace and shelter in the everlasting night.

My soul soars high into winters lonely embrace
I welcome you O harsh One
Step up and reclaim your place.

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This is the first poem I've written for ages so Its a wee tad rusty.... :oops:
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Postby Kat Lady » 09 Nov 2004, 18:08

This is wonderful! What do you mean rusty?

Keep writing!
If man could be crossed with the cat it would improve man, but it would deteriorate the cat.--Mark Twain

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Postby Running Wind » 10 Nov 2004, 05:13

Rust? I didn't find any rust. I thought it was grate. thank you for that feeling. I can feel it in the air and the words felt grate as well. Just lovely. :guinness:
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