secret world

secret world

Postby grey helm » 22 Nov 2004, 01:01

a film so fine obscures true vision
my eyes are sealed behind a frail wing
he dances and leaves traces of some other wordly obsession
i see the white tab on his tounge
i pray that it will snow.
under a secret world
fresh hands touching me
my eyes still yearning to become part of the world
im at peace
under a secret world.
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Postby Kat Lady » 22 Nov 2004, 01:08

I really like this one, grey helm. Thank you for sharing it.
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Postby Night Hawk » 22 Nov 2004, 02:09

LOVE this one!!! It reminds me of the still, secret world of a snowy Winter. :hawk::awen:
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Postby Branbeith » 22 Nov 2004, 04:20

I get the feeling of the Otherworld touching this one..Love it thank you

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