My first poem

My first poem

Postby autumn » 12 Dec 2004, 02:48

Hi

This is my first little creation - so please go easy on me :grin:

Ive only just started the Bardic Grade and so Im only just starting to get snippets of inspiration and this bit came while I was on the bus of all places !

Anyway here it is..


Pine Cone

The beauty of delicate leaves
With folds of strength,
Shadows that hide secrets within
Yet scented woody green.

So small a thing so beautiful,
Perfectly formed, an intricate creation
Giving itself to all
Those who care to take their time

Thankyou, oh majestic Pine



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Postby FallingLeaves » 12 Dec 2004, 03:09

A beautiful first poem autumn...looking forward to seeing more from you!
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Postby Kat Lady » 12 Dec 2004, 03:18

SummerBlooms wrote:A beautiful first poem autumn...looking forward to seeing more from you!


I second this, autumn. Please keep writing and do share more.
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Postby EarthWard » 16 Dec 2004, 00:36

:applause:

A true poet knows the wonder of the smallest of things.
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Postby Creirwy » 17 Dec 2004, 00:00

That was wonderful! I want to run out and find what secrets are in a pinecone!
looking out for more of your products of Awen!

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Postby Willowhawk » 18 Dec 2004, 22:32

Oh, I like this! I can *smell* the pine! :)
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