One Last Time

One Last Time

Postby Kay MoonDawn » 17 Aug 2005, 08:03

Listening to you breathe -
I sit here next to the bed,
holding your hand,
praying to the gods above
for one last time.

I remember when you told me -
that you were dying,
my heart rang out in grief,
my best friend forever,
tears ran down my cheeks.

I squeeze your hand gently -
to let you know I'm here,
a soft, weak smile appears
your eyes slowly opening
staring at me as you breathe.

Softly I whisper to you -
"I'm here for you now,
I'm here for you forever."
As I see your eyes close
for one last time.

Your breath comes to an end -
as I hold your hand in min,
tears start running down my cheeks,
I pray one last time.


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I wrote this back in Febuary 2001.

~Kay
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Postby Lizzy » 17 Aug 2005, 08:16

Very moving Kay :hug:
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Postby Flidais » 17 Aug 2005, 08:18

This is so sad Kay, I hope wasn't written from experience.
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Summer ends in gowns of gold and Red
Diamond encrusted webs
add sparkle to her aging eyes.
One last dance before sleep over takes her
and visions of green fill her dreams.
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Postby Kat Lady » 17 Aug 2005, 12:22

It touched my heart, Kay. Very moving.
If man could be crossed with the cat it would improve man, but it would deteriorate the cat.--Mark Twain

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