A String of Haiku

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A String of Haiku

Postby Mudpaw » 12 Jun 2010, 01:12

Wow, there's some really enjoyable poetry in this forum. Thanks to all who have shared. :)

This string of Haiku was written after a recent foraging trip in the West Norfolk Fens...

Looking for Mushrooms

Woody sweet morel
Your children live beneath the
Rotten hollow logs.

Free, wild green apples
Fill a small willow basket
That I wove myself

Ripe round blackberry,
Dangling unfulfilled because
Your thorn may prick me.

Gnarled old oak tree
Grows stubbornly in my path.
I rest in the shade.

S.Reese, 2010
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Re: A String of Haiku

Postby emmao1111 » 01 Jul 2010, 21:13

I love these - they absolutely sound like a snippet of reality and I love any poetry that is grounded in life - particularly everyday life. To make the ordinary sound extraordinary is a real gift. :cloud9:
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