Choose the last line!

[MistyNightWind]

This isn't stricltly speaking the last stanza, but the last stanza to be written.

I'm writing a poem for Yule and for one line I have 2 ideas and cannot decide between them. Since I am writing this poem with the Druid and pagan communities in mind I couldn't think of a better place to seek advice. So I hope you give your opinion.

Mistletoe

Ice and snow cover the Earth
Nature says, 'stay at home
By the fire of the hearth'.
Now is not the time to rome.

So on this frosty Yuletide eve
We burn the Cailleach Nollag
And song and laughter we weave
In the light of the Christmas Hag.

And we feast and we drink sweet mead
As we relish, (on?) the sacrificed Earth
Now in death, but we know will seed
(Once the Earth stirs into rebirth/The bloody Holly know no rebirth)

Under Druid blessed mistletoe
We kiss as the Sun begins to grow
Because on the deepest, darkest night
We celebrate the rebirth of light!

[MistyNightWind]

OK, not to worry I've sorted it now, and here is the final poem, incase anyone is interested:

Mistletoe

Ice and snow cover the Earth
Nature says, 'stay at home
By the fire of the hearth'.
Now is not the time to rome.

So on this frosty Yuletide eve
We burn the Cailleach Nollag,
And song and laughter we weave
In the light of the Christmas Hag.

And we feast and drink sweet mead
As we relish, on the sacrificed Earth,
Whose now in death but we know will seed
Once awakened into rebirth.

Under Druid blessed mistletoe
We kiss as the Sun begins to grow,
Because on the deepest, darkest night
We celebrate the rebirth of light!

[wyeuro]

well done!
wyverne /|\

[MistyNightWind]

Thank you I'm pleased you like it!

[seabhac star]

Hi Misty! Great poem and I love what you chose and how you worked it into your poem! Thank You for sharing...

[Nikki 2]

Geat poem mistyNightWind. I like it.

[MistyNightWind]

Thank you all so much it is so nice to have ones work apprechiated and liked

[Teileag]

I'm a bit late... but I like it, too!!

[MistyNightWind]

Thank you Heike!