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Postby Crimson Stormfire » 09 Mar 2011, 00:25

i see the mists of avalon,
flowing from my coffee.

I hear the songs of awen ,
whispered among the glass and steel.

i feel the teachings of merlin,
written in the concrete and asphalt.

i see the lady of the lake,
wherever there is water.

there is magic here
in all things mundane and not mundane
we have but to look and see
what we have lost.
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Postby wyeuro » 10 Mar 2011, 05:26

lovely! very sensitive and yet insightful. :applause: :applause: :applause:
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Postby Beorthwulf » 15 Mar 2011, 19:59

Beautiful. Thankyou
Which was first, is it darkness, is it light?

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Postby Crimson Stormfire » 18 Mar 2011, 18:14

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Postby Naleena » 24 Apr 2011, 06:45

those who have eyes to see, let them see. those who have ears to hear, let them hear. You nailed it on the head with this one...lol Great poem, much wisdom. If you can't find the mists of Avalon in your coffee, then where else can you find them? **giggles**
The trees reach out as silent witnesses always willing to listen to your troubled heart. Nature offers her ears to anyone who speaks into the omnipotant silence. There are places that wait for you. You are loved....you are wanted....you are cared for. You are not alone.....you are not alone.....you have never been alone.
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Postby Crimson Stormfire » 25 Apr 2011, 04:29

:grin: exactly
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Postby TheWingedShadow » 31 May 2011, 16:44

That makes me observe my steaming cup of tea in a different way.

In a good way.
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Postby Crimson Stormfire » 22 Jun 2011, 07:26

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