Beltaine

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Beltaine

Postby Greenwood » 27 Apr 2011, 22:05

The Green Man walks 'neath shady boughs
mayblossom in his hair,
a garland too of Elderflower
around a neck so fair.

Oak and Thorn, Birch and Elm,
he strides beneath them all,
the time is near, when those who will,
deck out their Mayday hall.

A rod of Silver Birch he spies
with ribbons hanging down,
soon the Beltaine feast will start,
a queen she will be crowned.

As night draws in the balefire's lit
to drive away the fears,
of barren beasts which faerie folk
may cause to suffer here.

A glass of ale, a platter full
is left amongst the trees,
to give up thanks for blessings given
for yet another year.
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Re: Beltaine

Postby Naleena » 02 May 2011, 04:32

Love this one, Greenwood :) All your poems seem to flow so naturally. You are definatley gifted.
The trees reach out as silent witnesses always willing to listen to your troubled heart. Nature offers her ears to anyone who speaks into the omnipotant silence. There are places that wait for you. You are loved....you are wanted....you are cared for. You are not alone.....you are not alone.....you have never been alone.
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Re: Beltaine

Postby Huathe » 02 May 2011, 11:37

Greenwood, You captured Beltaine's essence! :warm:
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Re: Beltaine

Postby Crimson Stormfire » 02 May 2011, 18:29

awesome imagery
:applause: :applause:
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Re: Beltaine

Postby TheWingedShadow » 31 May 2011, 16:37

I appear to be an admirer of your works!

Beltaine is very special to me - my daughter was born in the early morning of the 1st May, after the Beltaine night. As was said above, you captured it's essence!
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