I like it a lot - but you alread know that. Always creates pictures in my mind.
I am walking on the path of soul - finding my light - making me whole
If we don't understand what the soul is telling us, if we don't want to see the unseen, if we carry on walking blindly through life - without even seeing with the inner eye ... then we will search for explanations, then we will find ways of rationality, then we will see the clarity of things - and we will be frightened by the slightest signs of irrationality.
this is very evocative, conveys the beauty and magic well. wouldn't it be a beautiful death into a delightfully happy afterlife! i could almost believe in it. well, i suppose i do. thanks for the delightful poem. wy