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The lightbearer

Postby Kima » 21 Sep 2011, 07:46

I watch sunset and moonrise above the surface of the earth
I scrutinize its depths
And listen to night's anguished silences
To the day's many absences

I am the dreamer of the land
I travel the edges of the world
I am the shadow that stretches and bursts into new light
The bearer of Arwen
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Re: The lightbearer

Postby White Star » 21 Sep 2011, 13:12

This work has a lovely atmospheric feel. I enjoyed it a lot especially the second verse. Enjoy your journey.

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"No one has any right to buy and sell the earth for private gain. By theft and murder, they steal the land; Now everywhere the walls rise up at their command." The Diggers c. 1649
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Re: The lightbearer

Postby Kima » 08 Oct 2011, 10:39

Cheers! I'm happy to share.
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Re: The lightbearer

Postby seabhac star » 08 Oct 2011, 15:02

Beautiful poem Kima!
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