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Postby Hennie » 12 Oct 2011, 13:39

gonna leave this World
without regret
though it's the best World
I've ever had
gonna leave this World
without regret

gonna crawl the Dirt
without regret
for it's the best Dirt
I've ever had
gonna crawl the Dirt
without regret

gotta die first
and, man, it hurts
because every first
scares me to death
gotta die first
and, man, it hurts
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Re: first

Postby skydove » 12 Oct 2011, 19:42

Very, very powerful Hennie, you cut it straight to the bone.
Don't go yet will you?
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Re: first

Postby Naleena » 25 Oct 2011, 00:03

(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((Hennie))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
The trees reach out as silent witnesses always willing to listen to your troubled heart. Nature offers her ears to anyone who speaks into the omnipotant silence. There are places that wait for you. You are loved....you are wanted....you are cared for. You are not alone.....you are not alone.....you have never been alone.
-DAS
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