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by Hennie » 15 Jul 2012, 13:53
I sleep my dream
I am falling fast
into the hands of the Ultimate
I speak my myth
I am searching
for the answer of the Ultimate
I drink my softening
I am changing
to a tool of the Ultimate
I think my idea
I am a spark
of conscious of the Ultimate
I guess
I should leave
it all to the Ultimate
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by Aphritha » 15 Jul 2012, 16:44
I really like this! A good reminder...
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by skydove » 18 Jul 2012, 13:09
Your poems are like markers in the mist Hennie, thank you.
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by Hennie » 18 Jul 2012, 16:12
Thank you, it feels good to know my work can be of help.
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