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Haiku inspired by Bardic Initiation

Postby Mister P » 24 Jul 2012, 14:05

All feedback welcomed - I've been playing with Haiku for a little while now, trying to get the feeling for the rhythms.

Bardic Intitiation

Sunbeams on water,
Breeze on the top of the hill.
Old voices speak now.

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Peace in the valley, peace in the city, peace in your soul. Way-ay-ay-hey.
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Re: Haiku inspired by Bardic Initiation

Postby Aphritha » 24 Jul 2012, 20:04

I like it. :)
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Re: Haiku inspired by Bardic Initiation

Postby Michael C. Page » 25 Jul 2012, 01:29

Nice! |-)
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"If a man does not keep pace with his companions,
perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer.
Let him step to the music he hears,
however measured or far away." - Thoreau

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Re: Haiku inspired by Bardic Initiation

Postby Kima » 04 Sep 2012, 07:32

Good, I like it.
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